Slid back a page and a bit, so if it all sounds vaguely familiar it is.

Wanted to change up and expand on the interaction between the voice and Waldern.

Also end up intro’ing a new character. Not sure what role he’ll really play yet, but he’s part of Waldern’s history and part of the world.

So at worst he adds a wee bit of texture to Waldern.

Sorry it went up so late. Day off 2moro so will likely have the ability to post earlier.

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About timmholmes

Father of two little gentlemen. Author of The Mostly Made Up Adventures of Malcolm & Cooper. Creator/Facilitator of START A STORY Young Writers Workshop. @TimmWrites

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